Make Visible: Criticism
I’m a poet with a particular point of view. In these next blog posts I’ll post poems on different subjects from my point of view. Each poem is an expression, through me, of inspiration or Spirit or emotion. What you see in this light is what you bring to the poem.
Criticism of your writing, your looks, or your personality, whether positive or negative, has an impact. As “sensitive poets,” perhaps we react even more strongly than others. Remember, when life gives you lemons, make lemonade (or lemon bars)!
Today, I offer you this poem about criticism.
Lemon Bars Deluxe
Bitter with the sweet
Criticism unasked for
Compliments as well
Sprinkled with powdered sugar
Melting in my mouth
How much honey
Will take away the sting?
Your words sweeter
With every bite of lemon.
© Anne Westlund
Come back on Friday, April 5, for Make Visible: Love and Attraction
“Make visible what, without you, might perhaps never have been seen.”~Robert Bresson, French Film Director
Wonderful double entendre!
I like your poem Ann… great images! Those lemon bars look soooooo yummy and they work nicely with the poem. The photo makes me want to stop writing and do some baking! 🙂
Thanks, Widdershins and Sala!