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Heart, Soul, and Rough Edges — A Gypsy Journey of Words and Wonder

09 Jul 2012

Lin's Senryu

I’m a beginner at Senryu and in addition to Margaret’s great links, found this link helpful: Haiku or Senryu? How to Tell the Difference.
I followed the syllable count but switched the lines. Here’s my first stab at it:

Hot packed waiting room

Doctor gives bad news

How lovely is the sunshine

Haiku 02 (poetrypatio.wordpress.com)

Posted in Creative Writing, Focus on Form, Lines by Lin, Poetry, Uncategorized and tagged Haiku, Haiku and Related Forms, Poetry, Senryū

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